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by nevtari

schedule October 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was GREAT! Kanau is one of my favorite characters, so I'm happy to see him. Yay! Will there be more? Please?
person Suki
schedule January 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Out of all the Eerie Queerie fanfictions this one is by far the best. I had, origanally, been searching for a Hasunuma and Mitsuo fanfiction. The problem was that each and everyone that I decided to read was horrible. They all were something that a third grader would write; spelling errors, choppy sentances, and it would constantly change from 3rd person view to 1st person and sometimes 2nd person too. But your story didn't possess any of those qualities, besides a few spelling errors. I was really so happy when I found a story that actually had some quality to it, was well thought out, and wasn't a total turn off to read. I hope you write many many more Eerie Queerie fanfictions for those of us that enjoy a story with some actual quality to it.

~Suki~

P.S. Request: Would you please write a Hasunuma and Mitsuo fanfiction sometime.
person Luna
schedule November 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
fukin sweet can u do a kinky one of ItsukixShino. Where Shino acts like Itsuki\'s slave plz and thank u
person Herme23
schedule October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
First off, thank you so much for writing such a great story about this pairing! Besides the obvious Hasunuma/Mitsuo pairing, this is my absolute favorite and I\'ve always hoped someone with talent would write a fic for them. I love your style. The \"rogue hand,\" the \"renegage yawn,\" and the way Mikuni\'s clothes fell to \"romp on the floor with the discarded maid\'s uniform.\" You really have a gift for writing. Please keep it up. Yours Herme
person Rin-kun
schedule October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it... Kanau is SOOOOOO cute..... Keep at it
person melfina
schedule October 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, *please* continue! It\'s such a good story plus it\'s was really hot! ^_^ I need a cup of water or something. you did a great job keeping the characters IC too. This is by far the story I\'ve enjoyed the most in this category ^^
person Black Hylia
schedule September 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
How refreshing it is to finally come across a story that doesn\'t revolve around the two central characters- whom I don\'t much care for, to begin with. I was quite fed up with no one bothering to write about Mikuni or Kanau- my favorite characters- that I was tempted to write one myself. Though, the effect of reading one\'s own material isn\'t ever the same. Back to the point of this review. This was very well-written, unlike many of the Eerie Queerie stories I have come across, and though Mikuni\'s seemingly minute care for the phantom as something other than a sexual object was a bit OOC- that, in no way, disrupted the reading effect. I am actually quite glad he was changed- if even so slightly that it was difficult to tell. Excellent job, and I do hope you continue to write more stories such as this.

~ Black Hylia
person Corvin
schedule September 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
SPLENDID!! ABSOLUTLY WONDERFUL!!!! Do please update soon!!! It would mean the world!! <3
schedule August 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay, smut. It\'s so refreshing to see another Eerie Queerie fic done very well. Mikuni is such an uncaring sex fiend taking advantage of poor Kanau when he\'s exhausted. But, I guess the man has his needs (and doesn\'t care about anyone else). But keep up the good work and I\'ll look for more from you.

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