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I like this, kinda sweet and kinda normal Noata-ish. :)

I have always loved this story, but I remember coming across the full version years ago, why does this one get cut off before it really gets juicy?

Good solid story. Rocklike and to the basis of all the personalities involved.

great story!

nice fic, 5k hits too thats something to be proud of.

lll

the style aspects of this fic could be improved as well as a couple of run on sentences. However the overall feel of the story and the connection between the characters were very well done and that's more important. It was oddly sweet and I wasn'y expecting that. Nicely done. If you fixed the style issues, the fic would be perfect.

This is awesome. You seriously don\'t get enough recognition. Right up there with \"Good Morning Naota-kun\".
Any chance of another chapter?

I had read the censored version of this at FanFiction.net and have been hoping ever since that I would get to read the uncut version. It did not dissappoint.

Thank you, takun, for posting this. I know you got a lotta requests for you to email this to people [I was, admittedly, one of \'em]. Glad you thought to put it here. You\'re one of the influences that pushed me to write \"Good morning, Naota-kun...\". I\'d really appreciate it if you checked it out.

[hah, I sound like a giddy little 15-year-old fangirl, with decent grammar...]

[...or something...]

That was a good story! :) Glad ya did the uncut version!
Mmmm Nice story! :)