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for My Dreams aren't as Empty

by penpaninu

person Jenni
schedule September 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i have just finished reading "My Dreams aren't as Empty" and i wanted to congratulate you on such beautiful writing. I thought you handled the story perfectly and it was so great to see all the seiryu warriors have a second chance. Keep writing, your an amazing storyteller.
(p.s. sorry this sounds really formal, i never know what to write in reviews)
person Theblackpanther
schedule January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chap 15 and 16 were excellent. But now it's over...T_T I'm so glad Tasuki got reincarnated though!
schedule January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YeY. an update. and the last chapter. I liked how it ended though. ^_^ and i luved the story. I like how e1 (Besides chichiri who got left alone ;_;) has a semi happy endin. i will be waiting patiently for the sequel ^_^
person NUNICHAN
schedule December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was great. I didn't think you would have them remember their past lives in this fic, I thought maybe in a sequel or something but this is good. I'm very interested in knowing what's going to happen with the twins and Naisen and how Miaka helps them out. I can't wait for the next chapter. Update soon!!
schedule December 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Luved it. Poor naisen to feel bad for hurting that evil evil man. ooo i loved how sadako kissed him it was so cute. ^_^ please please update soon. I will be waiting for it.
person fushigiyugifan
schedule December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YeY an update ^_^ I luved the chapter as usual ^_^ poor naisen though. But he was adopted YeY and he got to go back to school double YeY. PLEASEEEEEEEEEE update soon. even if it ends up being short. ^_^
person Theblackpanther
schedule December 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please continue the story! This is the best thing I've read in a long time!
person NUNICHAN
schedule November 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Me like a lot. This was great, can\'t wait for the sequel. I had hope for Yui to adopt Naisen. Please continue to write such beautiful and sentimental stories. About Nana and Mareshi, is a wild guess but are they from the Suzaku seishi? If they are I think they are Nuriko (Nana) and Mitskake (Mareshi).
person Fushigiyugifan
schedule November 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. YeY for saito and yui. I loved it. but what\'s going to happen to Naisen? I hope he gets a good family and gets\' to stay close to sadako. ^_^ update soon
person NUNICHAN
schedule November 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was great, I\'ve been going crazy wanting to know if Naisen-kun would turn up like Nakago. Glad to see this is not the case, I really hope that maybe Yui or Miaka adopt him. This is very good so keep writing.

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