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for Innocent Love[(heart) Yaoi]

by Niomi

person Earendel
schedule October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh! My! GOD!!

I didn\'t know there was going to be more!
person Anon
schedule September 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OUCh. Nice story :)
person No Such Thing as Happy Engings
schedule September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It\'s sad an\' it\'s sweet.* I love it!

A line from \"Piano Man\"
person Niomi
schedule September 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey thanks for the two nice reviews guyes, and I\'ll sure try to explain the middle more. If you like this one, you should also check out Tokyo Moon, my newest addtion to the shaman king archive. Let\'s just say it put you right in moment with an unforgetable character!

XD


White Dragon
person DrkDreamer
schedule September 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Many good things about the story. Marik is an enticing character, warm and caring.

I don\'t understand anything aout Yo [sp] though. A shaman? As in \'magic man\'? What is he training for? Why is he being abused?

Nice beginning. Nice ending. Needs more explanation in the middle, though.
person Mu-chan
schedule August 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awe, that was sweet.






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