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August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very nice, I can\'t wait to see more. ^^
schedule
August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m curious about the ideas, though I really doubt that Ayaka would have slept with Eiri or vice versa. But, if it moves the plot forward. I mainly curious about the Taki/Shu/K thing.
I do think you need to write quite a bit more. A bit more description an all that.
I do think you need to write quite a bit more. A bit more description an all that.