rate_review Reviews

I just read chapter one and it’s pretty good.

Playing Rei as the uber, perverted ‘ice queen’ was a little strange but in an AU I can accept it. It might have been a little more interesting if you had delved into her thought process for suddenly taking Shinji on a whim.

You did a very good job with the description of the act. With stories like this authors often go overboard with street language and imposable performance.

If you can I would suggest getting more spaces in-between dialogue; it might just be the site editor messing you up. I ‘save as’ my Word file to HTML and up load that. It seems to work but still looks a little funny.

Well done.

Lord Saturn.

Chapter two.

Another interesting chapter. A voyeuristic Rei and a very amours Asuka with a very ‘lucky’ Shinji on the side. PWP but enjoyable.

Well done.

Lord Saturn.

Chapter three.

Another interesting chapter. It’s good to see the characters showing more emotion, especially Rei. Asuka’s mellowed personality is a welcome change from the norm.

Please work on the formatting though.

Well done.

Lord Saturn.

OMG! That was so hot! I guess Rei isn't so naive after all... ^_^;
Great work!
^^_^^

Always thought this fic was forgotten.
But now...

It is a very nice Story !
Hope you dont leave it behind.

MFG
Orion.

I REALLY like this fic series. Great update with the sex/mastrubation scenes, I like the idea of Rei being bi. ^_^ (Seeing as she got turned on by both Shinji as well as the women she knows.)Although I'm partial to Asuka/Shinji (though I'm a fan of all Three Children), it'd be interesting if all three of the Children would have a realtionship together. (I read a fic like that once and it was done pretty well, mostly because it was nice to see Asuka and Rei getting along instead of Asuka hating Rei while Rei's indifferent.) Either way, you think you could have Shinji come to his decision about which girl he wants to be with? Even if it's Rei, have him choose somebody (hell, having him choose both as long as they consent to that would be cool, too), darn it! lol One more thing then I'll quit bugging you: What about a Shinji/Asuka/Rei/Misato fic? You'd think that would be the most obvious H thing to write about, yet I've personally never even stumbled across even one! O_o Just a thought. Take care and good job! ;) http://www.fanfiction.net/~sailorstardust1

I realy thougth this FF was dead.

But now you brought a Update. And a very nice one.
I hope you decided to continue this ff ?

Your Story is nice to read and you have a nice style.

Keep it up !

Good story! But which one is shinji going to go for? Please update soon.

i love this story it is very mindblowing continue

::whistles:: damn...this is quite the fic! I'm very impressed simply because it's so hot! The only problem is that there isn't a lot of foreplay and while that's (unfortuantely) unrealistic for adults, most children/teenagers who are having sex for the first few times tend to explore a little more. Of course that's just personal conjecture. I could be wrong. Please let Shinji and Rei have another go. He deserves the chance to prove himself if you know what I mean.