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January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
shit man you are the best writer since my older sister and she has some pretty ranchy stories but this is the whole iceberg great
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December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Intresting, i dont think you let askua slip too much, in fact i just got done yesterday watching the whole series and the 2 movies, and see seemed to be in charcter in my oponion, not that its worth much :) otherwise i think you did a REALLY good job of keeping rei, and even sinji in charcter :)
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November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice job. Can\'t wait to read part 3. ^_^
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November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good! I really enjoyed it plz update soon. Also try to make your paragraphs a little shorter. If you do have more long paragraphs try to break them up into different paragraphs but other than that I loved it! :)
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November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good stuff. It\'s nice to read an old-fashioned lemon. :)
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November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very good so far, keep it up
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October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was very good. this is just a sugestion, in the next chapter how about have shinji take rei, asuka and misato at once. hail to the king baby.
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October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed it--maybe not the most ambitious story I\'ve ever read, but it did what it set out to do and did it very well; clearly written and formatted with plenty of detail. I look forward to more.
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October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well Well Mr. Rob.... Never had you cut out for this sort of caper but I must say it\'s good. Very good. Please write more if you have time.
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September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very well written. I\'d say both Rei and Shinji were very well in character. Rei was very mono-tone, and straight to the point, and yet still did a very good \'job\' in my opinion. Shinji definately played his part well. Looking forward to further chapters.