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Im confused...did you revise the story or something? this is a previous chapter, chapter 5 isn\'t it? what happened?

Chpt 7: Wow.. this story is so moving and interesting! I have really enjoyed reading Yuki\'s POV. I can\'t wait for the next chapter, maybe Yuki can finally find out whats going on with Shu, I think Shu wants everyone to know/ask and then he can get some help! Please update soon! (BTW its a shopping cart instead of a trolley :) in American English at least)

Great chapter, I love the story so far, I can\'t wait until you write the next one. This story is very good and I like it.

mmm.. didn\'t really learn more, but I can\'t wait for another yummeh update

Pot doesn\'t do that to you! Geez!

Currently home sick and at the moment I\'m hacking up my lungs(I\'m sure that you really wanted to know that). To tell you the truth I was afraid to read this stroy because I thought it was going to be about Shu dieing (I can\'t spell for shit) *cough* *hac*. Well then again your story isn\'t (hopefully isn\'t that is) done yet so that could still happen (but I hope not!!!). Your story remined me of another story(can\'t remember the titkle at the moment) which was about Shu cutting his wrists because he thought that Yuki was cheating on him. I really liked that story aswell as yours. Yours was very well written and I hope that you update soon. *hac* Hmmmm maybe I should get some home work done or something... Nope! I\'m going to read more yaoi! ^-^ It\'s the perfect cure when you feel like shit.

Till next chapter
Red Coat

@ no name: if u read the story you\'d know shuichi\'s not getting mad because of pot -_-
but the story\'s nice...

Yeah I wanted to tell you that this fic is amazling, I love it so much... thou if someone was to think about doing drugs and then was to read this fic I\'m not sure in which direction the person would turn it. But anyways it\'s all fun and games anyways, ne? Anyways I think that maybe Yuki should try and find some way of helping Shuichi get back to his old self or at lest cut down a bit on the drugs... or maybe for a surprising twist Shuichi could see (forget his name but the dealer that started Shuichi out on pot) again at like a store or soemthing when he\'s with Yuki... maybe Yuki could go to the club and meet this guy and then Shuichi has to sleep with him for more drugs or something.. I\'m not that good at writting so I don\'t know and this is the first really good fic that I\'ve read in the longest time, it\'s so refreshing to read something new every now and then with a awsome writter behind the story, it seems like you\'re giving it your all and I really need to thank you for that... well I should be going now this is the longest review I\'ve ever wrote so yeah, anyways if you wanna drop me an email sometime it\'s inuyasha_1234@hotmail.com... or nekoyoukaihanyou on AIM.... hope to hear from you soon and hopefully read a new chapter from this fic, ja ne

@.@ wow...i just read that whole story and i can\'t wait till the next chapter! I love how you make it were Shuichi is so innocent anymore.....great work i do hope you update soon!

Wow.. this is a very moving, realistic, and gritty story. I think its one of the best fan fics I\'ve ever read. Please update soon and don\'t give up on the fic.. its amazing! I am so glad we finally get Yuki\'s POV and I can\'t wait to see what is going to happen. I like how you have made Shu his own person and havn\'t resorted to the trite cutting/suicide ending but have shown with realism what happens to some ppl to use drugs as their escape route. Thank you for posting!