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January 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The way you made it a contest was excellent, and that each had a different idea of victory was a stroke of genius. Also, the fact that there was no particular victor was how I imaged it would be between Jin and Mugen. The action was hot and the writing clear. Thank you.
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December 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
lol what a lovely comment at the end by Mugen. :P Heheh nice fic, they always have to make everything into a game of who's better..so true. They were ic, very good.
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December 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Maaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaan! That could've unraveled into something really HOT! Not that it wasn't really hot already. I would love to see a sequal! I loved how both of them went into it thinking they would win over on the other. Very in-character. I loved it. Please do more!
~Gloria
~Gloria
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November 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this is really good-I loved it! I hope u write some more chapters-it'll def be interesting to see who ends up being seme and uke-or they could take turns! ^_^
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October 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*blinks* Uhh, ok, I'm trying to come up here with a really good review, but my brain just backfired-damn, girl, you really got the guys' characters down to the point! That was so-so.. amazing, insightful and hot, I won't be able to sleep for a month! Cudos to you!^^
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July 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So excellent. I love how you have both their perspectives, and how both are waiting to see what they've always seen, and yet are surprised again and again. I REALLY love the "draw" at the end. Such an IC thing for them to do... XD Great writing!
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June 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that was great, thanks!
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May 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It's me again. You updated this one and I had to read "AGAIN". Gee, I love this story. I enjyed it as much as I have the other times, maybe enen more. At the end i always clap and say yeah!!!!!!!!!! Such a great fic.
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May 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was all kinds of win. ^_^ much love for writing this.
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October 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great stuff! I love the internal dialogue! The kiss was excellent!