rate_review Reviews

BAH!!! hurry. Im very picky about my Mugen/Jin but when you throw in a threesome teaser I was excited...please hurry, please? ^_^

I really like the idea of this trilogy, and I\'m surprised no one else has attempted something like it (the trio vs. yuck weather). Switching the pov so often was confusing though; you might want to work on that next time. And lord knows I\'m guilty of this as well--your brain starts working faster than your fingers can type--but remember to watch out for those gramar mistakes, i.e. leaving out words and/or letters or making silly mistakes you normally wouldn\'t. Anywho, good job, you two. Keep it up.

hehe yes i liked it Fuu at the end funny

Hey, you should update, yep. I liked your story a lot. There were a few typos here and there, but definitely nothing that put your story down. So please continue soon.

omg that was fantabulous, please keep up the good work and update soon.

That was hot hot hot. Awesome job and not terrible ooc either. very cool, is there more *pleeeaase*

Carrie: Max really liked your story.
Max: Yes I do.
Carrie: Or maybe it\'s just that he likes Mugen/Jin
Max: Yes I do.
Carrie: He wants you to keep writing and post more chapters.
Max: Yes I do.
*Carrie assumes scary anime face*: IS THAT ALL YOU SAY?!
Max: No, I don\'t.
*Carrie clocks him over the head w/ a candy dish*
Max: *giggles* I was just messing with you. Keep writing you two and we\'ll keep reviewing!
Carrie: I don\'t know if that is good or bad...

.:droooooooooooooooooooooooool:. ^_^ Dear Ra that has got to be THE best SC lemon I\'ve ever read! I loved it....it was in character and extremely sexy!!!!! You guys get 5 1/2 stars out of 5 for that one it kicked ASS!!!!!!!!