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May 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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October 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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September 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That is the worst thing I've ever read. Learn how to write please!
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August 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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June 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
First 3 chapters were good, the chapters after that are obviously rushed. I really dont like how Serena has suddenly turned all slutty, especialy after just being raped like that.
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December 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
if thers more please post.very interesting story. wonder what would happen next hummm?
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December 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ok, so this story was really good for like the first 3 chapters and then, all of a sudden, serena turns into a whore. not that i'm entirely oposed to this......but she JUST GOT RAPED! why is she throwing herself at the first guy she sees right after being raped? i don't know about you, but i'd have been swearing guys off at that point. maybe if she wanted something sweet to replace the memory of being burtally taken that way.....but it didn't seem like they were aiming for sweet....more like hard core......but it's a good plot anyway. don't take any of this the wrong way....it's meant to help.
~Courtney
~Courtney
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November 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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November 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hope you update soon