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Ah, this fic is lovely in it's own naughty, cruel way. I had to read this one several times. My fan pairings, especially when the male is stronger than the female, almost always turns to sadism. I enjoy seeing the stronger male fall prey to the female's seduction & will. This fic was on the borderline of that sorta sadism. *Especially when referring to Brago's tiny manhood* Actualy, as young as he is, you aren't far from teh truth. Lots of fans forget he is still developing. Though I do love reading romantic fics as well, I thank you for stepping out of the box. You and many others encouraged me to step out and write my true fantasies too. And I have. If you have time, check it out.

I can say only one thing... what the fuck? I mean, it was formated excelently, the idea is nice, but the way you carried it out is a bit, well, odd. I have no suggestions or complains, but I do think many a things. Anyways, this interesting work of literiture will not go unattended by this author, and the next time a chapter appears, it will be my pleasure to read it. Ivan out..

This is so far my favorite Konjiki no Gash Bell! fan fiction. Regular Chéri/Brago stories are sweet, but this darker take on it was quite a breath of fresh air! I loved the portrayal of Chéri as a cold-hearted, amoral manipulator who would probably make Zoffis proud. Excellent work.

This is so far my favorite Konjiki no Gash Bell! fan fiction. Regular Chéri/Brago stories are sweet, but this darker take on it was quite a breath of fresh air! I loved the portrayal of Chéri as a cold-hearted, amoral manipulator who would probably make Zoffis proud. Excellent work.