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April 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this bit of smut! Takaya pleasuring his 'lord' Naoe was dreamy, there was a bit of continuity difficulty with the story going from past tense to present, but a very well written fic none the less.
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June 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was great! I'm sure I'm not the only one who always wished that Takaya had responded to Naoe. This was just lovely and I thank you for this.
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June 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i love this story so much it is not even funny are you planning on writing any more stories with these 2 in it?
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April 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG! Loved it. I just finished watching mirage of blaza and of course had to look for slash to read. this was great. I love that they get a new begining.
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October 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
no no no no! i swore i FINALLY found a story with takaya as seme, he did EVERYTHING to prepare naoe then you just switched it at end!! AAGGHH!! what the hell? no seriously, what the fuck?!
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October 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice concept for a fic, but too ooc.
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October 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So hot!!! OMG! SO HOT!!! Loved it! I hope you decide to write other MoB stories like this one! There are hardly any! So please think about it! Anyways great job!!
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October 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was great! It\'s nice to see a Mirage of Blaze fic that isn\'t all miserable and full of pain. I loved it! Write more, please!
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September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! That was hot! It is rare to find MoB fics and yours was hot! I hope you consider to write more, you did such a lovely job ^^
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September 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was such a great story! Real hot and it was simply fantastic! I hope you consider to write more MoB since tere are hardly any at all. Great job ^^