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this is shaping up well.
please try not to use so many exclamation marks though. a "!" at the end of every statement gets tiresome.
i originally saw tis at FF.net and thankfully you mentioned adultfanfiction dot net. id never heard of it.
however it looks like this might be discontinued, seeing as how long its been since the last update. a shame.
i hope you pick it up again.

When will you post the chapter 3 post it please.....

This story is nice i first seen it from fan fiction.net and it's not yet finished how disappointing but Claus and Alister Combination are really really nice keep it going to the max!

Hey great story I hope you're still around it would make me sad to think that you've stopped writing it. Since there isn't much this is a rare find. Hope you keep going.

Okay, this is wicked! I totally agree that there are a pathetic amount of stories in the Last Exile section but ehh, what can we do but try to fill up the space. We're going to have to carry this section. Hope your stilla round to get this review. I loved this story, atleast so far. The first chapter is amazing and before I go on to the second chapter I had to check and see the date this was published. I'd hate to see that this isn't finished yet and you had no intention of finishing it because I am really sucked in. Here's to hoping that you write more stories my friend.

its pretty good. I personally don\'t like alister but the story is still good.

EXCELLENT FANFIC! And well-written, for that matter. I ADORE CLAUS X ALISTER!!!! She\'s cooler than Lavie.

Woo-hoo! Alister kissed Claus. I hope they\'ll be making out.

This is very beautifully-written characterization. You have contrasted Claus\' shyness and Alister\'s experience nicely. Alister became shy at being asked by Tatiana if she invited a boy in her room in the second chapter, though. Hehehe.

This is absolutely great! Not too many Last Exile fics out there, much fewer that actually feature Alister or Tatiana! Just wonderful stuff.

Please continue. Please oh please update!

excellent story, I do hope that you continue writing. I look forward to the next chapter.