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September 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You need to use quotations marks around speaking parts (English major, sorry), but other than that I love this story. It reminds of that movie where Demi Moore was an exotic dancer. I was thinking it would make a pretty cool Gravi fic. Anyway, update soon.
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September 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
more give me more how could you just leave me hanging like that? right at the good part too. and who is this new guy? is he hot? is he nice? will he fall in love with shuichi? how does yuki fit into all of this? where is hiro? see all these questions left unanswered!
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September 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW! The first chapter already ROCKS!!! Keep up the amazing work! Really excited to see chapter 2!!! =66=
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September 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very interesting first chapter i like it so keep up the great work and update soon
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September 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Shake It Like A Polaroid!