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this review is to be nice this is ... good...ish great lemons but your actuly quite sick doing it wit u must be kinky

Well.....I would have to say this is interesting.I read all this is one sitting..probably shouldnt have. Maybe it is better when you are looking for good porn not to go to your favorite series. So yes, first off, the lemons where good. Well written, S & M is a good thing! I did think it should of had Shinogu and Ryoki double-penning Hatsumi...sheesh I'm twisted too. But of course I saw a downside. It really upset me that you claimed such a hatred to Hatsumi and Ryoki! I love them both deeply, especially as a couple. I have even cosplayed as Hatsumi. I am very like her. I don't think Ryoki should beat her and I really think Ryoki is a good person. I could never see him doing that to Hatsumi. Err even Shinogu being into anal....

Anyway, I liked the story, but wish you could see the characters in a better light.

Wow this story is amazing !! I loved it from the begining to the end, even though my favorite character
got a bullet to the head. It added such a twist to the story, as for the title. I found it to be very
ironic and morbidly sweet. I adore you, maybe a prequel?

-fuzzy

Yeah I always did think she as kind of slow. There is no amount of cherryness in the world that makes you forgive a guy who tried to get you gang raped. Nothing can shine over that. I don't know the whole story (Hot Gimmick) was kind of convoluted. It had you cherring for the strangest of people (like her step brother). Story seems good so far.

Well, to say the least, it\'s a pretty interesting story.

Uh, wow. So that\'s cool Galatea... greek name... interesting. The fic however... really odd ending... and you-yo you- made SHINOGU hated by Hatsumi!!!! *cries* and R-ry-Ryoki... oh my gosh... he-he... *cries again*... anyways, I don\'t like Azusa, but the series (as in the manga books) he is a bit different. The fic was ok, but I think there could\'ve been a better ending.

P.S. I\'m happy to say, no flames for you! I give you pure, heavenly water... to put out the other flames. *smiles*

It\'s a bit ooc, but otherwise it\'s good.

Your story is good. I like Hot Gimmick. But it kinda sad that you have to put Hatsumi in the situation that she got fucked by her own adopted brother and her so call lover. But overall, it\'s kinda new to me and I like it. Thanks for the story.

im reviewing! so post more pretty please?! i love this fic! <3

Post the last chapter you sick, twisted, lovely writer! I agree, for an adult site, AFF is pretty soft.