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October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O.O What more can you do to our poor little Hatsumi? *huggles aforementioned thing* You know, she really ought to get a backbone.
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October 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
^_^ Really nice. No wait... Really good. Wait... AWESOME! ^____^ So evil... And detailed. I really liked it, you write really doper cool lemons. O.o I give a thumb up and a half, why? BECAUSE YOUR MAKING ME WAIT FOR THE LAST ONE!!!!! LOL (but it\'s actully two thumbs up and if I have grammer issues now, its because I can\'t seee in the darkl) >_<
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October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great story now youmust update soon please.
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October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story. Dirty as all hell and loving it. I would like to see a happy ending - of sorts - whatever your creative devious mind imagines as happy at least. Please continue/finish this story. Looking forward to more hot reading!
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October 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Galatea,
Wow. This stuff is pretty good...I thought my bf was crazy at first when he showed me this, but now, I\'m addicted. :p SO PLEASE POST THE NEW CHAPTER SOON!
Blueiris
Wow. This stuff is pretty good...I thought my bf was crazy at first when he showed me this, but now, I\'m addicted. :p SO PLEASE POST THE NEW CHAPTER SOON!
Blueiris
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October 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
well....it\'s hilarious and kinda sexy in it own way too...hatsumi really pisses me off and you capture her idiocy perfectly. you\'re a good writer...a little twisted though...but am i just as twisted for liking it? :P
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October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg you are sooo funny lol..i couldnt stop laughing at some phrases that you used but over all your story is reaaaly good. please put up the last chap soon ^-^
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October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Realy LOVE your story, please don\'t kill it m-_-m *begging on my knees*
I think it\'s great that you managed to keep everyone in character:)
sorry if my spelling sucks^^; hope you get my point
Keep up the good work!
I think it\'s great that you managed to keep everyone in character:)
sorry if my spelling sucks^^; hope you get my point
Keep up the good work!
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October 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So how many more reviews till next chapter? Cuz for some sick and twisted reason i want to read it :) Very good job! P.S. This is the first time i\'ve see this fanfic, so i\'m not one of the 800 or so that read and didn\'t review. keep that in mind :P
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October 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, Just like you said, review. I know how you feel honestly, because I write the H.G. fic \"Love Equals Squared\" and I got only 2 reviews. Disappointing I know, but this is an adult site, and well sometimes people are just really scared to reveal their identies and the facts that they like sex fics... ok whatever. The story\'s ok, but it\'s a little smutty, dirty, filthy, disgusting, way beyond out of character (ESPECIALLY SHINOGU!!!!!!) but it\'s cool man. The story\'s pretty good, however I don\'t see how the title works in this. \"Galatea\" may be your username, but it\'s still confusing.
Well, just try to give this story a little happy ending if possible, and it\'s great. Keep up the great work! And oh - now I pretty much understand that Ryoki is all must-obey-me-slave mode again, but it\'s just so saddening. Shingou is like one of those I\'m-innocent-and-cute-fluffy guys, but you made them totally out of character. And that girl Yuki, well I don\'t really like her anyways! Ok, I\'ll shut my mouth now, because I\'m starting to get a little morbid... well that\'s enough from the girl who wants an i-Dog and humming Kelly Clarkson songs from her laptop. Ok bye!
P.S. Please read and REVIEW my fic too, I would be honoured. Thanks again!
Well, just try to give this story a little happy ending if possible, and it\'s great. Keep up the great work! And oh - now I pretty much understand that Ryoki is all must-obey-me-slave mode again, but it\'s just so saddening. Shingou is like one of those I\'m-innocent-and-cute-fluffy guys, but you made them totally out of character. And that girl Yuki, well I don\'t really like her anyways! Ok, I\'ll shut my mouth now, because I\'m starting to get a little morbid... well that\'s enough from the girl who wants an i-Dog and humming Kelly Clarkson songs from her laptop. Ok bye!
P.S. Please read and REVIEW my fic too, I would be honoured. Thanks again!