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*mouth hanging open* OMG, that last chapter was weird. But...BRILLIANT! I\'m glad you wrote this.

Heyas!

That is a very interesting tid bit of sexual info. Okay, let\'s guess about the next guest... Subaru? Or is it a girl? Ryoki\'s maid perhaps? Now I\'m dying of anticipation!

thats f\'d up man. seriously. wtf is shinogu fing hatsu i hate that pairing.. thats f\'d up.... but i still love the story lol

Kirby,

I read your fic, read the review I wrote! I\'m thinking if I ever do another Hot Gimmick fic it would be more romantic and toned down, but in the meanwhile, I\'m a slave to my muse. You seem like a big Shinogu fan, so I don\'t think you are going to like my latest chapter (chapter 6) =( So I appoligize in advance.

Thankyou for getting them to put a Hot Gimmick section up, its much appriciated. I can\'t wait for all the cool Hot Gimmick fanfics that are going to come pouring in.

You heard me people, write, write, write!

I called Hatsumi whorish because she was more willing to let Ryoki sleep with her after he hit her. I suppose I don\'t hate Hatsumi as much as I make out, I think I only do that to keep in character with the story. But I do believe that has a week character who has even weaker morals that start to crumble away with the slightest bit of coercion. Ie: the time during new years when Ryoki asked her with tears in his eyes and she said yes. I just think that she is a horrible influence on the young women who read the Hot Gimmick series. She teaches weakness.

There is another shojo title, I\'m not sure if you read it, Boys Over Flowers. It follows somewhat the same lines, a dominant male trying to get a certain female to be his girlfriend. But what I like about Tskushi (the heroine) is the fact that when the guy hits her, she hits him right the fuck back. I like her early in the series, when she\'s full of fight, but later in the series she does become kind of wishy washy, so I suppose its not the greatest example in the world.

I guess what I\'m trying to say is that I want to see stronger heroines in manga.

I just wanted to know, how could you consider her a whore when she\'s never done anything that would categorize her as one. She continuously refuses to have sex with him, and she\'s extremely innocent. If anything, you should complain about how innocent she is. It is kinda sad... and the fact that she let Ryoki hit her and not do anything about it is sad too... but I guess whe\'s afraid that she will get her whole family in trouble and they would have to move away, and not have a place to live. You have to give her some credit... ^_^;;; You can critisize Ryoki and Azusa all you want though... they\'re ass wholes. -_-. Sorry... I\'m also a big fan of this series... >.> The stories are good though! >)