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August 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I liked it. Especially how you removed Toukasa's wife from the picture- no bashing, just a silent, logical removal. For a first work, I am thoroughly impressed. Kudos.
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September 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, beautiful. It reminds me of my button I got from a convention. Anyhoos, you're going to continue the story, right? RIGHT?! Your writing style is wonderful in my opinion, and I hope to see more of your work soon. HINT HINT
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June 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awwwww that so cute, you should like make another chapter when you fell up to a lemon hehe, by the way i hope you do make a next chapter in this litte love story is soooo cute hehe, by the way i hope you like this review got you, you thought i would say the same thaing didnt you bwahahahahahahahahahahahaha love the story bye
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January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey, not bad! I'd love a steamy lemon, though!
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October 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I thought that this was a nice little story but it needs more....sex. I wish there were more Ghost in the shell stories. I would almost be afraid to try.
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September 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay first off awwww so sweet. But what happened to Togusa\'s wife? O_o Heh but it was just sweet. Good job. Never really pictured those two..wait yes I have XD Well nice job. ^^