rate_review Reviews

oh man!! i really wish this story would continue. i love dark romantic vampire fics!!! take care!

oooh i like i like write more please!!! oh ya um can you send an email with the title when you update? well see ya in the next chapter looking forward to it!

I know that it\'s difficult to start writing and that one tends to be conformist then. But really, vampires, again? There must be hundreds of RK fics with this thematic, and this has long stopped to be not only original, but even interesting. If you have a new take on the matter, then yes, why not. But there was nothing new in your story, and the awkwardness inherent to any first fic is only stressed by the blandness of the plot, whereas if you had tried something original (or if your characterization had been faithful) those flaws would have been forgotten. You don\'t take the risk of writing something different, which I understand in a way, but you seem unaware of another risk: your story will be lost in the bunch of all the vampires fics already written. Jmo.

Wow! Is Kenshin gonna go all cold when he get\'s to finding a vampire or anything? I really really want to know! This is so flippen good! He seems so perfect and everything. Must get tiring to have to keep writing \"That I am,\" though. Well anyways you fic rocks check for grammar though I saw a few mistakes. GREAT JOB!