rate_review Reviews

You should get a writing program that has spell check and not use notebook if your using it, unless your good at catching your grammatical errors. It\'s not horrible that it makes me want to puke myself into a coma, but it\'s not the greatest either. You should try organizing your format a little more, like starting a new section when a different character talks.

Anon, go check a dictionary bitch.

fushigi girl, your story is looking great. I love it when Shuichi gets on top of Yuki, I find it sexy. Keep at it. I really want to know if Shuichi will become a seme finally.

Maplecherry

Anon,

BTW, have you ever heard of a little thing called a typo? Or are you just too perfect in your own mind that one doesn\'t exist in your two page dictionary?

I think the only solution here is that you need to get laid.

Maplecherry

Is surpsize a word?

Anon, do you just float around Aff.net and flame who ever you can. Please hon, get a life!

I like this story, it is creative and funny. I just wish you would have updated all together. I really hate waiting. (No patience... hehe)

Maplecherry

what the fuck is this shit?