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for Secluded Desires

by Fai

person Sonora
schedule September 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Mmm....I like this one. Good job, my friend! Vash and Wolfwood need more lemons, so thank you for this, and please write more. ^_^
person RedHedLvr
schedule September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice little one-shot. Meryl is just annoying so I\'m happy to see her put in her place whenever possible. Hee he. Anyway, one suggestion, please consider adding a line between paragraphs. It will make the story easier to read.

Good job and write more soon!

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