rate_review Reviews

I really love your story "Spiral", so I find it really sad that you decided to discontinue it. However, I really want to know what happens to our main-characters, so will you please tell me in an e-mail?

I find it so amazing how tangible you make the pain of the characters seem, and it's so agonizing not to know what's going to happen. Especially Ryoma's and Fuji's backstory had made tear up, because it had been so heart-breaking to see the two characters being destroyed by their own decisions.
I really, really want to know where you're planning to go with your story and what the future of the characters will bring.

Sincerey,
locket-girl

continuation? I'd love to see where this goes. I liked your idea of the difference between being an adult and being a kid. I think its the point where someone will hold u and tell us everything will be ok and we know that their just mumbling comforting nonsense and that life is rarely that kind. I love this so I hope you'll see it through to the end.

This is very, very good. I love the anime, but I've not read much fanfic. However, this one grabbed me, pulled me in and refused to let me go. The story is unfolding beautifully, with exactly the right amount of suspense, questions and angst. PLEASE UPDATE!! I need to read more. All your characters are so wonderfully three dimensional.

If I have a minor quibble, it would be with the changing tenses, but it's nothing a halfways decent beta can't fix, and it doesn't detract from what is probably the best fic I've read in some considerable time!

Oh, and can I make a request for Tezuka/Ryoma? And for a reappearance of Ryoga? AND AN UPDATE ASAP!!