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by datenshiblue

person Eien_Kisaki
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sugoi!!! This fanfiction is sooooooo good! I haven\'t read a fanfiction that isn\'t OOC in a long time! I mean, i know the Echizen in here is a bit more violent than the one in the anime, but thats explainable due to the amount of years thats passed between the anime and the fanfic. Plus the fact that i think this will be a Echizen/Kezuka fanfiction makes this fanfic so awsome in my mind!!!! GO! PLEASE UPDATE SOON. I\'ll die if the next chapter doesn\'t come out soon.
person suzieQT
schedule October 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sugoi!!!! This is such a great story, perfectly delicious in all the right places. I am soooo looking forward to the next chapters. Gambatte!
person ren
schedule October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is awesome... i cant wait until you update.. i will definately be watching for it.
person Motto Motto
schedule September 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like your writing style.

Please Continue
person Liliath
schedule September 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! totally awesome!! I love this story, I just love it, the idea is totally perfect, cool, best of all and totally original!! XDD keep it up and update UP-DA-TE~!!!!!!! =^^=

PS:....whoa...the smut scene got me on fire...literally XDD ah..whoa, I need to cool off *sigh* a pity...okay, going to ron some hundred laps around the house wee~~ outta my way!!!!!
person mango
schedule September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg...is this a ot3? or is it ot4? can i say yay now?
person Alucard
schedule September 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This toaly kicks ass! I soooooooo can\'t wait till you update again!
person Liliath
schedule September 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
whoa O_O so cool, so captivating and addicting O_o whoaaaaaaaaa XDD I love it, write more soon! I love the angsty ryoma, hes so perfect, hes got my aching for another chapter, write more soon oh please!! the story seems perfect to me and the beginning is just...wow =^^= heh...just update soon and Ill be as happy as never :3
person Nichibostu (just too lazy to sign in)
schedule September 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. That is such a good prologue. You are such a good writer! Keep up the good work! I wanna know what happens next! Don\'t keep all us readers waiting or else we\'ll die of the suspence! =P ... er at least I will =P Add next chapter soon!

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