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December 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yatta! yuki/haru! NUM NUM NUM. I like your writing, however, it does feel as if you are in a bubble. Some imagery and scenery would be appreciated, thankyou!
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July 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I liked this a lot! Akito was very in character; fascinating, beautiful and frightening as always. The other characters are portrayed well, and the plot is very interesting. I can't wait to read more!
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September 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Can\'t wait for more. I\'m fangirling over this. XD
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September 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Could I make a request of you??? Would you mind skipping all your classes and glueing your hands to your keyboard and write more for your fans? Tee-hee...I know its a completely unreasonable request.
It has been a really good story so far and I am interested to see where you take it. Write more soon.
~Lemon Drops~
It has been a really good story so far and I am interested to see where you take it. Write more soon.
~Lemon Drops~
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September 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! Don\'t stop now!!
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September 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OOO hahaha that was so evil. ^0^ Poor Haru-kun. The story is great and just what will Akito do????0__0 OO dear,OOOdear!!!Update soo you hear me!!!SOON!!! And---what\'s that sound?*listen so the sound of growing wind* Its-O no its.....No no dont eat me Rits Please!!!to review ya for a while cause of Rita which now offical a 4 O__O;;; Man what is it with these stupid storms this year? O well see ya soon(hopefully) and keep up the good work ^__^.
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September 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You Meanie!!!!!! How dare you stop it there!!! :x Grrr! Lovely and suspenseful! ^_^ Really enjoying this! I luv anything with a delightfully perverse Shi-chan! And akito\'s arrival was wonderful!
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September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it love it love it..... i can\'t wait to read the next chap
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September 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A few things to say here.
1) “which will be shown with little ~~~\'s going...” if you change it to “which will be shown with the little ~~~ going...” You don’t need an apostrophe (which made it grammatically incorrect)
2)Your word usage is amazing! One can tell you spend sometime thinking about the right word to use instead of the one that pooped into your head first.
3) Good use of imagery. I could really get a sense of how Haru was feeling.
Keep it up!
-Talia
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September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
~blink blink~ Coool!