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December 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like this anime and I like this pairing and I even like your writing style...however I'm sorry to say this, as this will be the first negative thing I have ever mentioned in a review, *takes deep breath* your plot is lame! Semen bread...oh come now be serious!
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November 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hm, it seems to be missing something.
I can't figure what.
But alas, it was a good concept...
Though it did make my face scrunch up at the mere thought of that ingredient in bread.
Hehe.
I can't figure what.
But alas, it was a good concept...
Though it did make my face scrunch up at the mere thought of that ingredient in bread.
Hehe.
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August 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh man, all i have to say is LOL.
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February 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
can you make another yaoi story?pliz
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January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Lemme make this clear.Me not gay! But your story was humorous and written rather well.Just one thing, its semen not seamen!!!
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January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh yeah! Suwabara not swabara.I forgot!
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January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was SO funny! XDD
Really, you have an incredibly fruitly imagination, and you should spend all your wakening ours writting stuff like this!
Wanna se a kawachixAzuma next time! ^_^
Really, you have an incredibly fruitly imagination, and you should spend all your wakening ours writting stuff like this!
Wanna se a kawachixAzuma next time! ^_^
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December 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
.......Special.....Very special.....
It's "Suwabara," not "Swabara." And "semen," not "seamen."
They both seemed pretty out-of-character. Suwabara should be left to Monica.
"It said that the samurai of old often used something special to add flavor to their breads when they were in isolation."
"The book said that intercourse was the best"
Right... so... um... yeah... anyways...
And Pierrot isn't gay. His girlfriend left him because he has ED.
And thanks to you, I will forever have the image of Suwabara buttering his erection burned into my mind.
One more thing:
KAWACHI X AZUMA = OTP :-P
It's "Suwabara," not "Swabara." And "semen," not "seamen."
They both seemed pretty out-of-character. Suwabara should be left to Monica.
"It said that the samurai of old often used something special to add flavor to their breads when they were in isolation."
"The book said that intercourse was the best"
Right... so... um... yeah... anyways...
And Pierrot isn't gay. His girlfriend left him because he has ED.
And thanks to you, I will forever have the image of Suwabara buttering his erection burned into my mind.
One more thing:
KAWACHI X AZUMA = OTP :-P
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November 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
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