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by WindCharmer

person noone
schedule November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yes, that picture made me feel that Ritsu was responsible for Soubi\'s lack of ears and tail. YOu wrote this well, wish it wasn\'t just a one-shot though. Anyways, great job, baibai!
person Mina
schedule September 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What a lovely take on Soubi\'s missing ears and tail! ^.^ *thumbs up* Now I want to make my friend cosplay as Ritsu-sensei with my Soubi costume.
person Sephy
schedule September 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You don\'t have enough reviews for this peice! I loved it ^^ It\'s a very nice fic, and we all know this is what we imagined took place. I don\'t know anyone who says Ritsu wasn\'t the one to make Soubi lose his ears. And for once Ritsu didn\'t seem overly...evil(?) in this fic. I think he\'s pure evil in carnet, but you didn\'t over do it and I like that. Soubi, instead of being the over-angsty teen, thought only of how he this was going to help him for his Sacrifice, and I love that too. It\'s the same mindset I have of how it was, even though we see that he hates Ritsu now. Well, we won\'t know for sure until the series is continued (if it is. Oh god let it be!) or more manga is made. Great job ;_;
schedule September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG, I LOVED this...I always had this sneaky suspision that Soubi lost his ears to Sensei (well it wasn\'t as much a sneaky suspision as much as a dirty thought). Well written and very hot, you should write another one!
person rabidfan
schedule September 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
well.. soubi with ritsu.. this pair is nevertheless angsty.
not much fics about this two though i shld say.
I kinda like this fic, but i thought it could have been more. oh drats, the hentai in me wrote that.
still its gd. *thumbs up*
person Yeah!
schedule September 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I want yuyu hakusho!!!
person SchuldigLiebe
schedule September 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
different... yes. But i\'m actually writing a chapter about Soubi X Ritsu now, so it was rather interesting.
I noticed a lot of spelling errors, though i\'m not one to talk.
nice work none the less.

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