rate_review Reviews

Wonderful! You\'ve managed to catch something not many people do: humans are afraid of predators, and vampires are most certainly predators. A vampire has a considerable problem with hubris, and being denied by a mortal they\'ve chosen to \'favor\' with their attentions would anger them considerably. I especially appreciate the touch of Alucard\'s mental cruelty, forcing her to face the man she loves while he uses her as he sees fit. Such a fitting characteristic! What he views as his would become much like territory: to be defended, used, defiled as he saw fit. And it matches his personality that he would use someone\'s desires against them. I applaud you!

O_O o_o X_X *dies*

*is forced back to life*

DAAAAAAAAAAAAAMN that was.....that was DAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAMN

*deis agian and is forced back to life agian*

DAAAAAAAAAAAAAMN UPDATE SOON MY DEAR GIRL THIS IS SO........DAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAMN

ok here i give you the pics as my treat if you want some more cool pic e-mail me but i have a lot of pics my dear so tell me what style/scene you want ok

Storm. ~_~m *looks back at fic and sighs and wishes she could write like that*

-crying- why dose Alucard have to be such a tease?? –crying some more-
-Sniff sniff – can’t wait for your next chapter. And here is your giant cookie. Up-date soon :)

doesnt he look like a GOD in those piccies?

DUDE...

very unexpected the way it ended... i mean the chap cause it is not ending here, right? RIGHT??????????????

U BETTER NOTTTTTTTTT END IT HEREEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!

+uber super cookie extraordinaire!!+ here u go my dear girl..

yeah i said uber +giggles+

bai bai, kisses and reeses...

Su, mew...

Ohhhhh...fabulous. ^_^ You\'ve managed to capture every true Alucard fangirl\'s most treasured dream. Who doesn\'t want a wild encounter with that monster of darkness? You\'ve made quite a fan of me with this tale, I assure you. Characterization...delightful. This is literally the first non-AxI Hellsing fanfiction I have read that I have thouroughly enjoyed. Perhaps he\'ll return to his lady of the emerald eyes? If so, I do hope you\'ll write further. This is a delightful tale.

ok one word DAAAAAAAAAAMN!!!!! that was great, please, i beg you to keep writing stories like this. *smacks herself* ok sorry but really im at a lost for words with this fic. if you writing a part 2 ill most surely read it and review. if you dont *sighs* that be one wast of a good plot but thats just my idea. i would really like to see what would happen if you kept going with the fic, THE ideas im getting from this fic are reather good, so if you do keep going email me if you need some ideas.

*trys to keep herself from demaneding that the auther keep going*

before i lose these ideas im going write them down and go now, so PLEASE KEEP GOING. *gets hit in the head by Alucard for being in polite\" ~_o that is if you want...ow

*punches Alucard, the result: her ending up side down, hald up by Alucard\'s hand on her leg, blinking at a smug looking Alucard.*

Storm ~_~m

i had to read it again i couldn\'t help myself. i hope you will keep this going and make a part 2 8^)

please please please make a part 2

that was awesome i loved it i can\'t wait till you post part 2. please tell me there is going to be a part 2

OMG U POSTED ITTT

Welcome to AFF hun!!

i had to re read it MUAHUAHUAHUHA... how can i not, huh??? HAWT HAWT HAWT!!!

hope to see u around here too.... and... uhm... prrmeow...

+run away and hides giggling+

Su

wow… dam I was reading it with a friend and she still is under the cold shower. He dose love to command people around. Should I be evil and tell on him? Hehehe. It was my pleasure giving you the Romanian, at least my teacher isn’t screaming at me in vain for not doing my homework …