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for Sunshine

by clairejones

person Megan Consoer
schedule September 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person JdWheels
schedule January 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I take my hat off to you. I thought i wrote fairly good WHR fics, but you blew me away right here. I stand in awe, and hope i can come close to this.

How about making this one shot into a longer peice? I already have something in mind.

JD
person Mariam
schedule November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The inner turmoil of Amon--

yeah.

You fucking nailed it (er...excusing any puns or anything. ha.ha.) You totally nailed his personality. You rock.
person Mariam--again
schedule November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just had to comment again when I read the more--


"You forgot to add the bubble bath," she commented.

Amon stepped in and sat behind her, leaning his head against the wall of the shower. "Men don't use bubbles."


That utterly cracked me up. I laughed my ass off. I could totally see him saying that.
schedule October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Not bad...I do love naughty deflowering Robin fics.
person Megan Consoer
schedule October 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
person shell
schedule October 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
3 LEMONS IN ONE FIC?!?....TO THE MAX!
person SuckUBusJ
schedule September 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow

i just came from the Hellsing category which i never leave... wanting a change and wow, i def loved this.

Great job, keep up the good writing...

Their relationship sure is interesting and intriguing...

Take care!

Su
person Megan Consoer
schedule September 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
person Sparky16
schedule September 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Jesus! Amon\'s going to have Blue balls by the time Robin\'s trough! LOL actually I don\'t think no one has ever played on the fantasy bit. They are always doing it in bed. thanks for something different. Jesus I was crying for Robin in the begining! Actyually this one seemed to be more true to character with Robin than any I have read so far. Sadly that includeds Meris\'s and misora\'s included. LOL the actions and reactions were very much Robin. Nice.

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