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October 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good stury well done hope you continue soon! :D
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September 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
In spite of all the amateur writing shortcomings, this story flows so well. I happened to read up to part 10 in one sitting and...the cliffhanger...it\'s painful to stop so abruptly. If you haven\'t updated since the 17th, please, it\'s about time. You seem quite inspired so far.
And it\'s rather impressive to see these magic girl anime characters in a harsh setting, a definite welcomed change from the slow-paced, romantic fluff seen from most fanfic writers.
And I expected more sex from 10 chapters, really, as difficult as it is to admit. You summarized the last time Haruka and Michiru made love, which is the only real disappointment I can name so far...
And it\'s rather impressive to see these magic girl anime characters in a harsh setting, a definite welcomed change from the slow-paced, romantic fluff seen from most fanfic writers.
And I expected more sex from 10 chapters, really, as difficult as it is to admit. You summarized the last time Haruka and Michiru made love, which is the only real disappointment I can name so far...
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September 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your fic really cool I like your stories a lot and I mean this in the nicest way HURRY THE HECK UP!
UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!
UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!
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September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Haruka as an assassin a new idea but the part with Michiru VIP room kind OOC for her I know it an AU fic now your writing is very fluid. Keep your fic in upstand matter