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for Makoto

by abcd

person ree
schedule August 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
another amazing fanfic that i quite enjoy reading about including the ones about ami and minako. continue writing more please.
person Nao
schedule January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
O_O wow *chuckles*
just wow
person deep serenity
schedule September 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hi btw I reviewed the ami one? did you delete it? I was nice and at least I reviewed!

I thought you were going somewhere with this one.......then you didn\'t, if you would just take maybe 2 hours more time and put a \"little\" story in it like WHY she needed the money and WHY her father was a prev on top of the uncle(which was a bit much) and WHERE did the monster come from, why didn\'t she kill it and WHY did she only do it three night

and you are aware that all that would KILL her right? and it would take more then a day of sleep

but the concept was okay and it could have been very good, as plain smut it wasn\'t bad

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