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i have read all of your other fanfics that you've written that are like these and i think you should continue more.

well............I wouldn\'t have a problem with your stuff IF you would stick to one things or another, first she likes it, then she doesn\'t, thats not realistic, there are some people who LOVE the pain humilations etc, and I know it\'s smut but........in what universe would the boys start out nicely asking to fuck her just because she is there and then turn extra violent for no reason....it makes no sense

and what school do they go to again? ami is asked to be raped and paid for it........raped when she says no and still paid (which that story was kinda funny in it\'s sick way and not so bad)
mina is accosted by teachers and never thinks to yell tell and (if it hurt so bad in the locker room why didn\'t she start to fight?)
then to top it off, ummmm maybe you should ask someone else so you can get some realism(just a little cause I know it\'s smut) to your sexual acts cause....some of it is just way out there

Uhmmm that was... odd...