rate_review Reviews

wow, I absolutely LOVED this fic!! There are just no words to express the way I feel about it. . . it was just so. . . AWSOME!!! *o*
Anyway, can't wait to read more PoT fics from you!!! ^^

P.S. The Furuba//PoT Outtake was hilarious!!! xDDDD;; LOL

hey i love the story but can you please tell me what senpai and kohei means? plz!?

that was hot ^__^ and i love ryoma just nonchallantly goin back to their homework at the end lol

OMG! i love this fic so much >< *mops puddle of blood on the floor* Sorry, excessive nosebleed. XD There should be more MomoRyo! ><

oooo, nice...but you do need some variety in your vocabulary hon. But the overall story was good.

some spelling and grammatical errors, but overall a good fic!

Mother of \'Shrooms. You rock my socks and roll my shoes! There is so not enough support for this oh-so-fabulous couple out there, and I still haven\'t figured out why!!! Bless you, it was very enjoyable. I wonder how Momo\'s family will react...and Nanjirho for that matter(becasue we all know he\'d find out somehow)....

Constructive Critisism- Try a greater variation in adjectives and words choice, example-Ryoma did a lot of screaming, and while that is NOT a bad thing, try other noises, like wail or cry(adjective for desired effect) maybe even softer ones for more deviation: keen, mewl, whimper, cry(again, adjectives).

I don\'t want to be a harpy about anything, and I really did enjoy it....a lot.....so I\'ll quit while I\'m ahead. Hoping my suggestions aren\'t irksome, and waiting for you to continue writing.
~Nacht

P.S.- If you ever want a third opinion about your writing, I\'d be thrilled to assist ^^

I am fan of Momoshiro x Ryoma. This is great stroy. more stroy. :)