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for Hot to Go

by Kugatsu

person Leeana69
schedule January 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*snickerfit*

"Bet you could fix it for me." Best.line.ever.

XDDDDD

Normally I hate ZoSan but this was pretty good. ^-^
person Wulfie89
schedule August 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
mmmm~ yay.....ZoSan....yay......I love it lol <----Wulfie ramblings.....now on to the real review.

Ok first off...interesting plot line....I've never seen one like this and it was written well. Yes your chapters are a bit short and I spotted a few spelling errors here and there but mostly simple stuff like pressing space to early or something which I've done myself but overall I like the story and hope to see more soon ^^

~Wulfie~
person Marionette
schedule November 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*reaches end* *blinks* *checks last update time* *chokes* OMFG!!! Please, for the love of actually good Zoro/Sanjii stories and for the shippers that read them UP DATE THIS FIC!!! >< This is so well written. I love it so much! It can't end here!!
person LawWren
schedule September 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh... I like this story. Nami bashing is fun!! So anyway, I really do like this story and hope you update soon. I want to see how they turn out together, and Luffy is so cute it nearly makes me want to throw up!
person lo
schedule September 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like this a lot. The characterization is not bad.
person Maeve
schedule January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Review etiquette always worries me, but, here I go...

This is extremely well-written and very sexy. There are a few minor spelling errors now and then, but as a complete unit, this is great work. You do a wonderful job with sexual tension and interaction.

I'm looking forward to more.
person susa_chan
schedule January 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
HI! I haven't revieves for you before so I thought that what the hell...so...I really like this story ^^ though they're somewhat OOC but I still like this very much ^^ I'm sooooo waiting to read the next chappie *purr* but hey...you haven't updated Hot to Go for so long!!! What's going on?! I wanna read more ;;_;; so pwease pwease pwease pwease update as soon as possible ^^
-talkative rabid yaoi fangirl-
person Lemon
schedule November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved this story sooo much!!XD

Especially the Ame chapter, where they\'re soaked with rain and Sanji was crying/laughing.
ZoSan\'s my all time favorite pairing in One Piece!

And well...don\'t worry if Nami\'s out of character (?) It\'s a fan fic anyway, and you could do whatever you like^^;
person BlacKat
schedule October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yea it was short but you UPdated it atleast mmmm...that was a veyr nice scene at the end :drool: XD lol yea\' can\'t wait for other scenes like this :bloody nose: ~;.;~ lol can\'t wait for the next chappie either ^^
person naru*ta
schedule October 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
perfect!!

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