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oh that was -so- cute >__< The cuddling and all that
just an adorable chapter

oh why is he bleeding .... I am serious, why is he bleeding ?? lol Guess i should check that out
Anywho, i am off to the next chapter, since your plot seems so appealing ^__^

I'm loving your story so far, especially near the end when Ritsuka starts getting his dreams. And I like the angle you've taken with Yayoi. He's normally portrayed as the tag along (something I'm not to happy about), but you've done a wonderful job with him.

I would also like to be added to your mailing list for updates. This is one story I would like to read through until the end.

This is really good. I wonder if Yayoi & Kio are going to be a pair? I hope they are. Can not wait for the next chapter.

OMG i love it can you please e-mail me when you add a new chapter

My e-mail is sally_girl_007@yahoo.co.nz

I love the way your story is playing out. You characterize Soubi and Ritsuka well.In my personal opinion, I think Ritsuka, when the time is right, should just tie Soubi down and have his way with him. I would love to see Soubi all flushed and so not 'in control'of the situation as he usually is.

Moving on LOL.

Do I smell love brewing between Yayoi and Kio?! Own what a adorable pairing. I have never seen this pairing done. Now that I think about it, it would make sense. I like the idea very much.

I just cannot stand that pink haired cookie cutter dumbo. Please, someone shoot her. Can't she see that she has no chance with Ritsuka?! She doesn't deserve Yayoi, he is too good for her.

If you could, please send me an e-mail when you update. Pretty please!
my e-mail is:
justice02908@yahoo.com

Please update as soon as you can.

OH this is sooo hot. Ritsuka is a dirty little boy, please continue. More! More! MORE!!!

Awww~~~ how sweet. Anyway! Nice fic, it's SO addictive. I love how you created the Loveless fighter (OH yeah!). Glad you kept all the characters in, well, character. Especially Ritsuka-kun's mother *shivers* she's creepy. Please update soon! *pssh~~ if you have an email list for updates, please add me to it!*

Dude... I applaud. My inner yaoi-whore is bouncing off the walls in a BL high. That was very good. I just feel obliged to give an over-all review on the entire fic(so far), as oppose to six short ones on each chapter. I like how you so well capture Natsuo and Youji. Those boys are too fun. But, that was very fun. I will definately continue to read if you continue. I\'ve fought off my dad from logging me off to finish reading it. That was really hard. >.> But, I will stay on topic! The fifth chapter made me want to cry... so I did. I sat in a corner and cried... for about twenty seconds. Then I got back up and continued reading. I love it. Very, very fun. ^.^

yay! they're okay!! awww too bad that citrus was a dream ritsuka had.. but it was sweet to read nonetheless ^__^ this whole chapter was great (as if i'd expect otherwise! :p), even the ending between Kio and Yayoi was sweet.. and as always, can't wait for the next!

~ lg