rate_review Reviews

Such good story! You've done an excelent job with the characters.
Loved the Angst on chap 5. Can only hope for more!
Please don't be cruel, provide us with more lines!

what? update!!! i wanna see more!!!

This is one of the best Loveless fics I've ever read, and let me tell you, oh my, I read!
I was waiting for an update so anxiously I checked the site daily!
In a fandom full of mindless attempts to create something remotely readable, your story exceeds them all! It's intelligent, plausible and I could actually picture it on screen! Oh how I wanted to see this on screen!
The characterization is excelent, the plotline outstanding.
Thanks for writing and please update soon!
Hugs
Ojousan

OH my god... what are you doing please dont kill him.... I like this fic so please don´t disapoint me...

I think is so sad Ritsuka and Soubi can't ever be a real pair, because they're deserve to be! They fit together, they love each other!
This pairless guy is so creepy! He doesn't care about Ritsuka, he enjoyed seing him suffer!
This chapter was so intense!! I NEED to know what's going to happen next!
You write so well! All the emotions, the tension, the suffering!
Please update!!!!

DAMN YOU'RE GOOD!
GOOD STRUCTURE, GOOD GRAMMAR, GOOD PLAY OF CHARACTERS, GOOD DIALOGUES!
GOOD GOOD GOOD!
AWSOME!
PUNGENT!
EMOTIONAL!
PASSIONATE!
I'M SPEACHLESS AND BREATHLESS!
AND I OH SO WANT TO SEE RITSUKA EARLESS!
DAMN YOU'RE GOOD!
PLEASE WRITE MORE!
HUGS
ME MOANING

I just read the first 5 chapters, and I can tell you, I'm looking forward to the rest! True, Ritsuka's ears and tails are cute but....making him lose them sure does have it's ups too! I was surprised that Soubi would obey Ritsuka and hurt him. and not just a little hurt, but something quite lethal it seems. I hope Ritsuka's okay! But then again, I'm sure Soubi would take good care of him ::grin::.

I noticed a few spelling errors in the beginning, but I guess you got betas to proofread your things, which is definitively a plus. I think your writing style is good, not forced and artificial sounding. Good job!

I love this story update soon

Absolutely wonderful. You've got me hooked, please update soon!

OMG PLEASE UPDATE I beg you!!! I'll give you a cookie if you do!!O_O I love this fiiiicc!!!