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by apachep

schedule August 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
LOL!!! ... no orgy with those four but T/T first time sex?

... OH do you know of any m-preg stories with those two?

~shadow
person Chahron
schedule December 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was really good. I've read some pretty good stuff and I can say that you are not doing bad at all. I really enjoyed it. If I could say one thing about it, it might be good to clarify a little bit on exactly who's doing what. Not that it wasn't hot, but names are okay to use once and a while, even if you did a marvelous job coming up with wonderful ways to describe the characters. I loved it, write some more, we can't wait!
person Vinya
schedule October 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
at last one good Wolf's Rain NC-17. Others ale boring and cliche. Yours is really cool!
person kaesaku
schedule September 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
well, i liked it!
nothing beats wolves in heat!
nyahahaha~
ooh, an orgy..?
interesting..
are you going to continue that, hmm..?
nwei, loves ur fic!
^^
person TimeFlys
schedule August 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
END?! But it was sooooo good! I want another chapter!Toboe was so cute and innocent I loved it. Also Tsume giving Toboe a little help- well let me just say I didn't know weither I should jump up & down for joy or drool. (so i did both. lol) I hope you write another chapter or a sequal for this it was great! And hot!!!
person Sarong Luv
schedule August 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like it was nice I hope there would be more and create more stories (grin)
person JadenLeeFaye
schedule August 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved it. The characters fit each other perfectly. I know you would like some tips on how to make it better but the truth is, it is wonderful, it needs no changing. Though a small suggestion? More? *gives kisses and licks for inspiration*
person Sylvie
schedule February 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love it! Awesome, awesome, awesome -- well written and so ... awesome! Please try to write more.
person shimisaki-kun
schedule January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please, please continue this! It's great! I really wanna keep reading this!

Tadashi Shimisaki
person lijana
schedule January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed reading Storm. Wished there was more!

btw: I'll point out that you seemed to use the word neglected in place of denied or something similar. You used it twice like this. *constructive criticism*

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