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person anglevengence
schedule December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
-_-..........XD
person Anon
schedule October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I Think you could\'ve improved it by making Toboe a little less ignorant. He should begin to understand what they\'re doing earlier, in some sort of Epiphony.
person storyfreak
schedule October 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it.
You have got to add more or make a sequal.
person Reilon Imura-Matsui Ishioka Miaji
schedule October 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*nosebleed* Poor Toboe... I think he needs a crash course in sex ed version 4.0. I\'ll teach him!! Kiba and Hige... those horn-dogs! Gotta luv \'em!
person S.O.S
schedule September 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW! I liked it even though I don\'t usually read wolf\'s rain-stories, but that was good and that orgy that Tsume thought about.. It isn\'t a really bad idea for the next chapter.. Or you should write how tsume tells toboe about \'basics\'.. or something like that! *w*
person Ri
schedule September 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Liked it? I loved it! OMG! I want to read more! It was great!

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