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October 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Touch him! Touch him, touch him, touch him! And DON'T STOP THERE!!!
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October 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I agree with Fearless Leader! Yes, yes,yes! And I am quite taken with your Anne Rice-esqe proclivity for overt adjective abuse. (that's not an insult... really...it's not) On to the citrus fruit salad...
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September 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW! Only two chapters in and I'm hooked! I hope you updated quickly - this story is going MY way! Brilliant!
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September 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AAAGGHH!! How could you STOP??? More, now! Do you hear me? Obey your fearless leader! (and come back to the group where we can nag you more ably.)
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September 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Each chapter is absolutely marvelous. Considering that you didn't intend to break the story up into chapters, I'm a little shocked at how nicely they end. Great beginning. A very interesting side to Aya. You evoke the atmosphere and mood brilliantly. I'm a little sad to find myself back in the mundane world at the end of each chapter.
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September 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice work. I love your extensive vocabulary and the poetic way you paint the story. It's a joy to read, and I'm enjoying the time you take to tell the story.
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July 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YAY! Update plz (even if you are a sporadic writer) whenever you get the chance. I like the way you started this off and I can't wait to read any updates you might have. I enjoy the flow of your writing and it's particular style. So thanks, I'll keep a lookout for the rest of this story. Plus, there aren't any glaringly obvious grammatic errors. It's refreshing.
Kayo
Kayo
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September 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I don\'t think your personification of the characters is off base. I can easily visualize the two of them like that! The first chapter has an alluring hook, so I hope you\'ll update soon.