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person RyuichiSakuma2
schedule November 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ah! This story is so kawaii. Write more. ^^
person fyredevyl
schedule October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whelp, yet another good chapter out. Virtually no mistakes either!!!!! :P j/k And I knew the moment Momo-chan mentioned he was seeing someone that it would be Kaidoh. I just finished watching Momo-chan and Kaidoh compete in doubles. Interesting pair, I can definitely see it.
Sorry I\'m not going to leave a long review...just taking a break from studying vectors and projection matrices....fun.....
****SQUEALS!!!!!!!!!!! YOU HAVE TO UPDATE SOON!!!! PLEEEAAAASSEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!******
-----couldn\'t resist
person Rika
schedule October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it. Love it. Not only is it RyomaxKunimitsu, it\'s got EijixShuichirou and KaoruxTakeshi as background pairings. My three favourite pairings in one fic. How do you do it? Great work. x3
person Oko-chan
schedule October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Damn you, and your cliff hangers! >.< Gah, I can\'t wait until you get to write the second chapter, I loved the part where Kaidoh spit all his sake over Tezuka. xD And thank you for putting more couples into it. ^^; I must say that I\'m not a big fan of Oishi and Eiji, but I\'m glad that someone finally put up a Momo and Kaidoh one. >D At least someone else shares my dream. xD Anywho..write more..and no more cliffhangers, though I know that that is rather not possible since they make a story much more interesting. o_O Damn logic. >.<
person ren
schedule October 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMFT!! despite the ryo illness, that i SO didnt want any part of, that you wrote very well, even if i didnt like it... omftomft you are so awesome...you are like my total hero.. keeeeeep it up girl, i cant wait for more.. cause me likey Ryo and me likey Tezzie...damn i wanna read more NOW *wipes drool from mouth* makes me wanna write mine. ^__^ i will be waiting impatiently
-love ren
person ladygizarme
schedule October 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yay! i\'m so glad you finally finished this chapter!! wooot!! and dude, OMTezukaRyomaAndFuji! ya gotta love ryoma\'s mysterious fainting *smirks* conveniently placing him in bed next to a very naked and now awake tezuka ^__~ muwahahahahaaa i hope you write more again soon woman!!
person ranni
schedule September 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Tooooo cute! Hope to see more soon~
person mango
schedule September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*fanning herself* does anybody feel the heat as well? it\'s agreat opening of what i\'m sure going to be a great story.. though i can\'t really give comments on the grammar side, i can still tell you that it\'s good in characterisation (is that a word somewhere in the dictionary?), though, i have a feeling that maybe he\'s not the type that grab people just to appease his boring-state-of-mind... especially not to his teammates...
person Oko
schedule September 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Man, it\'s always nice to see some new PoT fanfiction on here. ^.^ There hasn\'t really been any new stuff in awhile. >.< But, yes. I really enjoyed it, and you better write more to it soon enough. ^^; I really liked be plot idea. o.o I\'ve been wanting to do something like this for a long time now, but I can never really find any time to avtually write things anymore. >.> Also, are there any other couples planned for this /besides/ Tezuka and Ryoma? As much as I love that couple alone. xD
person ren
schedule September 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
well, seeing as how i havent seen any pot, i am still all excited about the next chap.. it is well written, and there still werent as many errors in it, as there were in mine, and i was fully awake when i was writing mine! ya did good... keep it up!! you ROCK

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