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for Striking a Balance

by psyca

person Anon
schedule September 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Am I the only one who thinks Kaoru is really being a pill? How could she possibly think she could take care of the problem (uh, 4 or so really big guys) by herself, while quite badly injured?? I\'m glad she smartened up a bit in chapter 8 but Kenshin should have spanked her! (which might lead to things, hmm...)

The chapters do seem a tad short but then I am a very fast reader :)

Good story though, with a realistic premise. Very enjoyable. Now looking forward to lemony goodness :)
person penpaninu
schedule September 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ya Karou! Kick that guys ass! Okay, come on lemony goodness

person julia
schedule September 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please update this story soon!
so far it is one of my favourite ken / kao fics, and that means a lot!
*whispers* and please don\'t make her weak or helpless, i cannot stand that kind of fics - kenshin the hero and so on...
person penpaninu
schedule September 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story! I Applaud each new chapter ^_^ Glad to see so many updates so soon!!
person kaoru-chan
schedule September 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
morrrrrrrrrrrre ^^
person Sosoru (not logged in)
schedule September 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Need...longer...chapters!
person kaoru-chan
schedule September 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I wish your chapters were longer
person Rei
schedule September 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
cool!!! hahahaha so looking forward to the next ones!!! i hope kao kicks as hard im disapointed in kenshin and yahiko they dont have any faith in her i hope she shows em and shows em bad that she doesnt need help each and every time she\'s in trouble
person Clemen
schedule September 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
One word for you, Update.
person Happy Hippo
schedule September 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love your story and also your (not really) short chapters. I\'m so excited to see you updated real fast with several chappies. So, please keep going ne. I can\'t wait for the next one with the lemon :)

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