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for Striking a Balance

by psyca

person Haista Napa
schedule September 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It\'s so great that you update so quickly! I adore the storyline! Bring on the lemons! ^^

Hope you continue!

Ja ne!
person penpaninu
schedule September 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
(CLAPS) Very good! I liked the conversation alot, you had them both in character perfectly. I hope to see an update soon!
person yue
schedule September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awww. i like this. it really brings out everyone\'s characters and this isnt just some fluffy love story filled with sex during the time after kenshin and kaoru got married. look forward to the next chapter.
person Eden\'s Epitaph
schedule September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a very interesting story. I love the novelty of it and it has been forever since someone wrote a story in the orriginal setting of the anime/manga. Your writing skills are good, but -- as i suggest everyone, even myself -- you should reread your chapters at least 2 or 3 times before you post it. I don\'t care much about grammar and misspelling, I have ortographic struggles myself, but I find that it increasses the chapter in many aspects. I\'m quite eager to read more of this story though. You got a very intreaguing story line there. I wish you fun and inspiration!
person Sosoru (not logged in)
schedule September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like it very much so far. Update soon.
person Rei
schedule September 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
dun dun dun!!! uh oh now what is kao going to do? ken is not happy not happy at all tehehehehe
person Kim Yeoung
schedule September 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Excellent, excellent story. I especially like all the detail put into Kaoru\'s instruction; as a student of Aikido, it was really interesting to me. Can\'t wait to read the rest.
person penpaninu
schedule September 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
super schweet! I read chapies one and two the other day, and three and four are up now? You are too cool, you konw that? I love your writing style and straight forwardness. It\'s been a treat to read so far! I hope kenshin can comfort kaoru later (lol)
person Clemen
schedule September 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. Hope you update soon. Laters.
person Kaoru-chan
schedule September 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story ^^ ...you have great detailing ^^ I hope that you will continue writting ^^ I will be looking forward towards your next chapter ^.~

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