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You ever going to update?

I think it would be a bit harder to take Makoto down but it's still a fun story to read. Interesting situations she gets put in, particularly in the latest chapter. I hope to see an update soon.

wow, a nice and unique way to tell the story, I really enjoyed it, please kee up the good work.

This was one of the most erotic stories I've read on AFF! You honestly deserve and award or something! The whole bit with the construction workers in the warehouse was brilliant and hot at the same time! It was unbelievably sexy! And the descriptions were fantastic! And here I thought mine were good!

I actually said "Awesome!" out loud when Atsuko gave the guys Makoto's phone number. I don't know if you're planning on writing more to the story, but if you are I honestly hope to see more with Makoto and those guys. Those scenes were incredible! BRAVO!

Wohoo!!! Finally you've updated Sky, with yet another hot chapter if I may add.

I really liked this chapter, Atsuko is a great new addition. It's surprising to see to what lengths Makoto is willing to go to keep the whole situation a secret, it was really erotic and at the same time interesting to see how Makoto's character develops over the cause of the story.

As a suggestion, I hope that he next chapter is based in Makoto's school.

I hope you'll update

All I can do is keep coming back to check, I still hope for an update Sky.

I keep coming back to check Sky, in the hope that you might have updated the story. Well I see there's still nothing, I can understand that if you are busy it can't be helped, please let as know how this story will be set for the near future. Are you planning to update it etc.

I've e-mailed you, I'm not sure if you're still using the email address that you have listed back in 2005, maybe you'd be so kind to update it with an active e-mail account, since I have a few ideas for a next chapter and would like to mail them to you.

I was also going over the rewviews and someone suggested that the next chapter be set in Makotos school. I think thats a good idea, as it would add the chance that they may be discovered.

If you can please drop me a mail, my address is palmbi@hotmail.co.uk.

Hope to hear from you soon, and please continue, I'll keep coming back to check.

OMG this story is so hot. Please update it skyclad.

I enjoyed it a lot. Espcially the second chapter. Just one request please don't take another 2 yrs to update ^^ it would really kill me.

Ohh still no upadte *cry* pelase continue skyclad, I was really looking forwrad to a new chapter.

If you are having trouble coming up with ideas, I could mail you with some.

Update soon please.

I really liked this story, I can't wait to see it contiuned. For a next seting, Makoto's school would be a nice idea.

I'm looking forward to a next chapter, please update this story Skyclad.