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I enjoyed reading this story, both chapters where great, although the second one is much better. The Build up to the sex was very nice.

Will you be continuing Skyclad? please let us know.

Well this was a nice fic for a change. I remember reading the first chapter back when you first uploaded it. It was decent story and fun to read.

As for the second chapter, i see that you have updated just recently ( Fairly long break). It shows that your writing has improve over the cause of those two years, your writing is more detailed, and your paragraphing is done well to. As for the contend, the build up to the actually sex scene was great, though for your next chapter you should look into another theme, maybe a one on one with either of the two boys.

I hope you are planning to have the next chapter up soon, it would be a shame to have to wait another two years.

Overall great read, and it was interesting to see the improvements in your writing.

Update soon. Please!

Wow, now that was hot. First quality Makoto Fic I have read in this section. Will you please continue writing skyclad. This fanfic has post 10.000 hits. Sadly it seems no one can be bothered to at least review the story.

Please continue, pretty please ^^

My God Still no Update, it's the ned off the world as we know it!!!!

Please update soon Skyclad. About my little outburst just ignore it I am a bit of an emtional person ^^

Wicked, I wouldn't have thought this story would be updated after such a long time. Great new chapter, I love how you have worked the humiliation into the story that alone deserved five Stars. Hope you will continue with this, can't wait to read all the other ways that makoto will be humiliated. Maybe in the next chapter you could add a little anal into the mix, Since the Boys have not explored that part off Makoto'sbody yet. The next chapter should be in a public place, where the is a chance that theyw ill be caught while they are at it.

Hoooooooooooooooope for another great update.

Great story, I liked both chapters a lot, although the second one was slightly better. Have you been writting other stories in your time between the two chapters? As the second chapter is more thought out and better written in general.

Please continue to add new chapters, I am very interested in finding out where the story goes form here.

Nice story actually liked the second story a lot more than the first one. It was a lot more detailed, and you threw in a lot of erotic ideas before the actual sex scene.

Maybe next you could build on the part where Makoto was walking in public with the boys.

Very impressive, enjoyed reading both cahpaters very much. I was browsing the Sailor Moon section, came across this story with 10,000 hits. So i thought I'd check it out, no wonder it receives so many hits it's easily the best Makoto story on the entire section.

Shame that people can't be bother to at least review it. I hoep you are working on a third chapter, if so please don't take another two years to bring it out^^

Wow, super smexy! I really liked this, even though the lesbo scene was pretty short. I especially liked Makoto's corset-thong outfit; lingerie is too underappreciated. Keep up the good work. Maybe I'll see some more one day.

Hi I read this story and loved it, both chapters weregreat. I hope you will update soon. Maybe in the next chapter, there is room for some backdoor penetration or double-pen.

Just a suggestion, but keep it up. It was a great read.