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June 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I guess I should also mention, that this is just an alt account for me, my main account is DeamonX, I posted my last review on 10/2005. Damn long time. Worth the wait I guess ^^
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June 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great to see you're back Skyclad. I read this story almost a year ago, and found it fantastic, sadly I saw there was only one chapter, when there was easily potential for more. When i came back to check my heart nearly stopped. Needless to say I consumed the entire chapter at once.
Hope you'll continue.
Hope you'll continue.
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June 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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June 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It's the greatest story ever. Squared and times ten. I didn't think you'd ever top the first chapter, but you did it in spades. You're a far better erotic author than I could ever hope to be.
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October 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?
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June 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well written enjoyed it very much.
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November 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
it was a very well writen story and enjoyed reading it several times.
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November 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is a good story please continue.
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October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I quiet enjoyed reading this one. For someone who was having a second shot at writing a fanfic, you did surprisingly well, you should definatley extend the story and add another few chapter. I would say that is the best Sailor Moon fanfic I read so far, bearing in mind that Makoto is (used to be) my favourite Sailor Fighter.
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September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
well, a little better then the last one.........I read it mostely enjoyed it Lita....would have beat them silly though period....and it\'s a little distrubing to think of such \"young boys\" 12 or 13 sexually abusing a girl just because.........17, 18...I could see
anyway I will take the story for what it was meant to be, my only real huge problem is WHY would she leave cum on her face for the father to see? and seriously what is with people, porn or whatever that make men think a woman wants cum on her face? I can even see other parts of the body but on her face? that was the most distrubing thing for me, it ruined the sex scenes for me cause it\'s a totally turn off to me in real like and fiction
your writing is getting better though
anyway I will take the story for what it was meant to be, my only real huge problem is WHY would she leave cum on her face for the father to see? and seriously what is with people, porn or whatever that make men think a woman wants cum on her face? I can even see other parts of the body but on her face? that was the most distrubing thing for me, it ruined the sex scenes for me cause it\'s a totally turn off to me in real like and fiction
your writing is getting better though