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for Naughty little Tohru

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person .El Brain Phartage.
schedule October 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
-Chuckles- You're right. I DO Like this, and I don't care what other's think. I am 18 dammit and I'll read and like what ever the fuck I want.

Not only do I like it, but I like how you portray Tohru in this. Indeed to many fics is she innocent and sweet, true in the anime she is this, but why should we have to write her as such?

Keep up the good work, never be afraid to put your writing out there cause you're afraid and other won't like it. If you like it then who cares?
schedule January 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is a most refreshing story with Akito and I enjoyed it very much. I do feel sorry for Tohru; but it is different so I am not complaining. Keep up the good work and please update soon!
person ree
schedule October 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOM!!! what the FUCK was that!!! WHO IN THEIR FUCKIN' MIND WOULD READ THIS, WHEN IT IS SO FAR FROM THE TRUTH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
but anyways, it's nice to see a story that's different from other stories(you know, where torhu curses and is one SLUTTY PROSTITUTE!)when all of them just show the sweet, innocent side of torhu and not the sex crazed bitch side.
person Amaya
schedule June 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I Think it\'s a pretty kool story. keep writing and i\'ll keep reading.


love, dirty little reader,
Amaya
person Lady Akina
schedule November 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What\'s going to happen if they do find out what really happened to her? I find your fic very very interesting. Please UPDATE!

-Baby K
person Jack16
schedule September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is your boyfriend speaking. I kinda like this story but lacks more sex. :P
Don\'t worry baby, I\'ll help you with it.

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