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by FAKEmpregnator

schedule December 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh I loved the chapter and I waited so long for Ryo to top! ;-)
It was great to see Dee leting go some of his restrictions :-)
person Mazy3261
schedule December 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I never get tired of reading this story. I'll patiently await the next chapter.
person Twiggy
schedule December 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hiya! I'm just writing tolet you know how much I LOVE this fic. I've read what there is of it over the last few days, and I had to positively tear myself away from it when I had other things to do! lol. ^ ^ I laughed out loud while I was reading it, which I don't ordinarily do, so if that's any indication of how super-awesome-WONDERFUL it was, there ya go!! I love how in-depth and thoughful you words are; it really makes the story (which, by the way, is brilliant ^.~) come off the screen and into reality. Thank you so much for writing. *hugs!!!*
~Twiggy
person Twiggy
schedule December 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I of course meant "to let." It came off as "tolet" which looks a little too much like the word "toilet" for my liking. Sorry 'bout that!!
person Dambae
schedule November 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Demoness, you are a phenomenal writer. Your stories (yes, I've read Learning Aids, too) are such that I hate stopping reading to go to sleep/work, etc, and your words paint a very visual picture. I am very much looking forward to the next chapter! (You and your beta(s) keep up the great work...I absolutely love reading grammatically correct stories that include the above qualities, as well, as there are so few out there nowadays.)
Thank you for taking the time to put your thoughts and dreams onto virtual paper so we voracious yaoi-loving gals (and guys) can enjoy the time spent in your head!
person Bard's Apprentice
schedule November 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yes!! DEFINITELY worth the wait. ^_^
Dee's such a cute ass-virgin! XD
but i'm still dying to know what the bullshit in his past is, & who it was 10 years ago. they're connected i bet. ^_~

Stan, huh.......... grrrrr.

& YEA Learning Aids!! that's one of your best! ^_^
person Kuragari75
schedule October 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ok, really only one word I can use to describe your story.... WOW! just Fucking wow! I love it and will continue to watch for updates! when's Dee gonna give it up to Ryo? can't wait to find out. Bye
person rj1ofakind
schedule October 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Okay- when ya gonna finish? Please, don't make me beg. Okay I'll beg even. I want closure and Ryo on top.
person bard's apprentice
schedule September 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this is a really great story! i love how u've worked a case into it to; u rarely find that in fanfics. your writing style is very good too, if somewhat awkward at times. i'm really enjoying this! ^_^
the subtlty of Dee's bad memories of Arnon are wonderful -& i'm looking forward to seeing whether u add any other possible experiences to that emotional distress. ^_~

please update soon! ^_^
schedule September 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
an update! an update! (would scream but it's 1 oclock in the morning here ;-))
Oh no Ryo seme :-( but nothing along very embarassing talk cann't solve :-)
I'm so exited to read more! Hope for new stuff soon!!

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