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by FAKEmpregnator

person rj1ofakind
schedule August 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I continue to enjoy this story. My fav so far of any right after series fics.
RJ
schedule August 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
here I am again. please tell me that you are contiuing please. Is dee's reaction because what happend to his friend in the storry withhis father or is it because something happend to Dee? I NEED answers! :-(
schedule August 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i love how you continued the story. I was so sad that it stoped so soon.
I'm not at the end of your chapters but I have to call it a night. If you didn't finished already I'll beback begging for more soon ;-)
person Ayeshagirl
schedule July 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That story was fucking awesome! And really well written... you managed to capture the characters so well, it was like reading an 8th volume!

I'm a big fan of FAKE, owning all 7 volumes (and loving the last one XD) and i think you really did it justice... i got into the story, rather than just thinking 'oh, it's two guys fucking, whoopty do'.

Plus, it made me horny. Fu fu fu...
person Tlynn
schedule July 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh Yay! I was so worried that you would never finish this. I want them to get the bad guys and have fun hanging out in the village! YAY!
person Telsa
schedule June 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for this story. I hope you´ll update soon!
person malcara
schedule January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
man!!!!! so good!!!! but the suspense is killing me when is Ryo going to get to be top!!!!!!
person Tlynn
schedule January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh - So much fun! I'm glad you don't have Ryo getting all squeel-y about everything. I am wondering if we have similar ideas about Dee's back story, but then for anyone who knows the City it seems pretty obvious how Dee would have first explored his same sex side. I would love to hear your opinion of the fic I hope to post this week. Of course I'm still chicken to put so much of the cop story stuff in it but you are doing a really good job. Keep it up and I hope you'll have our boys get the bad guys (like they wouldn't!) And maybe they can figure a way to deal with some of the other lowlifes while they are at it, without breaking cover that is. Keep up the great work and I can't wait for the next installment.
person Jollyolly
schedule January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very well written! Especially like the boldness Ryo has for Dee! ^^ It's a nice change...he still blushes like mad, but he's firm in his declarations of love for Dee. Thanks for a great fic...keep writing, 'kay?^^
person Anon
schedule December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow... I'm impressed. positively, so don't listen to that... err, those insults in some reviews of yours.
I like how the story moves slowly, and I hope you keep writing and update soon...
I also like how Dee's and Ryo's roles are reversing... There's enough of sweet-shy-submissive Ryo out there. We're talking about a MAN here, ladies!
This has potential to novellength, and I'd be the last complaining!
*wipes tear away* Wonderful, plain wonderful... That's why you get only so few reviews: people can't put in words how goddamn good you are.
Admiringly,
Nariel

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