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for Abstinence Education

by MadameManga

person Babsie
schedule March 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh My GOD! How happy I was when I sw that you update the story. I like very much this chapter, specially the moment where Ryonosuke declare his love for OīHama and the way Manji and Rin react. I would love to see that Rin and Manji admit that they love each other at least from themselves. You transcript, a very well done way, the conflicted emotions between the samurais, the honor, the senppukku, that die are a better way to choose than live in deshonor. You are doing a great work in this story. I wouil love to see in the next chapter a little more interaction between Manji and Rin, afterall Manji already have his ravanche and what will he do no? Send Rin back to Anotsu? Donīt think so...I realy love it and you make me vey happy every time you update. Please donīt let this story unfinished. Update as soon as you can and keep in mind you are wanderfull. Congratulations.
person Aidreal
schedule February 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story is amazing. i read through the whole thing in two days :D and i have to say i certainky wasn't disapointed! keep up the good work, i look forward to the rest of the story :)
person Babsie
schedule February 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD!!! Iīm so happy that you donīt give up on this story. I check on it every week looking for an update and than, here it is. Thank you. This is an awesome story you are writing. To the chapters...fantastic...as all the story this chaopter runs deep on the emotions of the charecters. I started to read and coundnīt stop until the end...and now I WANT SOME MORE PLEASE! :-) I keep imagining how they will find a way to act on their fellings...it seams to me that they really love each other but coundnīt act on it. And there was the fight...the things that OīHama accused Rin was fantastic. Now I wanna see how they will deal with this...will they fall apart? will they be more close to each other? will they assume, at least to themselves their fellings? I donīt have word to say how great it is. It is so hard to find good stories on Blade that when I find one I donīt wanna let go :-) Please update as soon as you can...Iīll definelly will be waiting. Congratulations!
person ashez2ashes
schedule January 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What the heck? You totally redid chapter 23 didn't you? I know I'm not imaginging it... I'm argh! It's all ovelry melodramtic now, instead of subtle. -_-;; I'm usually your loyal cheerleader, but... It's very frustrating when an author goes back and dramatically edits previous chapters long after you've read them and this isn't a simple grammar edit, the dynamics have changed a lot.... I'm not imagining am I? I could have sworn the Anotsu would try to marry her thing wasn't so blatant the first time around...

And if I am totally imagining these changes I apologize.
person ashez2ashes
schedule January 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I dunno, maybe it isn't different, maybe I'm just not remembering it right? -_- There's so many chapters to remember... Oh just ignore my crazy ramblings from before.
person momo
schedule November 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awesome T_________T
I havn't enjoyed a fic this much in a long while
please please please update because there is a tragic lack of manji x rin fics
<3
person Valiant
schedule November 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I had almost forgotten about this wonderful story until I scrolled down my favorites and found it. I am so happy I did!! I can't wait for the next chapter! Rin better kick some ass!
person Babsie
schedule November 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic chapter. Really good. Canīt wait to see how this fight between samurai's daughter will end. You are a very good writter. We get envolved with the plot and can't stop till the end, but we always end with an "I want some more" taste in the mounth. I would love to see Rin claming mujin as hers...to everyone. I'm a sucker for happy ends... :-) You are doing a kgreat work here...please don't let it unfinished. Update asap. Congratulations
person Carol
schedule October 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, please keep this going! It's an incredible fanfiction, I haven't read something this well written in a long time!
person Shatterwing
schedule September 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love this!!!!

Please don't drop off the face of the planet and break my heart!

The writing is good the plot is good hell the sex is good what more can a
fanfiction junkie ask for!!

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