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September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow, VERY good for a first fic!!!! i love the character interaction. right on. and yes, continue to write, please?
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September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I liked it, especially with Muegn being afraid to admit he cared for Jin. It just made me happy, because you made him seem like he was needy without being a weepy uke. Please write more!
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September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was awesome! Pretty well in character and I like the post series setting, leaves room for lots of possiblities. I really hope you write another chapter.
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September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
bring on more!
you write hot 8)
you write hot 8)
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September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was HOTT!
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September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow.......that kicked ass. At first I thought It would be extremely OOC but as i read it i found it wasnt, and it was actually a tastefukl lemon...if there even was such a thing. there was a plot before it and i liked it, it makes everything seem that much more real, very good job, you should write more
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September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very good... yeah it\'s a bit ooc.. but it\'s cute and well written
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September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it!!!!!! very good^.^